I don't see anything wrong with your sentence template. Question is whether it is the sentence template for the role that Jane Doe has in the shared fact. Or have you customised the sentence template for this person in the Edit Person dialog?
Open Edit Person on Jane Doe and select the shared Census or Residence fact that you are having the problem with. Click on Customise Sentence. Change the sentence template to what you posted. Should work.
Alternatively, in the Customize Sentence dialog from above, click "Reset to default". If that sentence template is not what you want as the default, then close Edit Person and goto:
Lists > Fact Type List > select the fact type used by Jane Doe > Edit > select the role used by Jane Doe > Edit role > revise the sentence template for this role
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